I need help re-writng

I dunno if this would really go here, but I need help rewriting riya's history. Cause It is kinda rambily and long I need to take out certain things, and add more important things? Is anyone up for helping me? I am really awful at writing. :P


I also need a little help changing some stuff on zeke's but they are much more minor


AND I HAD NO IDEA WHERE TO PUT THIS... I know this is not a art project :P

Dude, I love writing. English is like my favorite language and an awesome hobby. I VOLUNTEER.
Now just pay me 50 bucks and we'll call it good.

I'm kidding. But I'd love to help if you want. 83

50 BUCKS DONE


But no i could draw you your new lai for the help! Wanna note me on DA about it?

AWWW YEAH I LOVE BUCKS.

Dude you don't have to. ;u;
But that would be super awesome, I'm not gonna lie.
Actually, do you mind if we do it through PM's on this site? I always have a hard time with the notes on DA. I tend to forget to answer them a lot, and sometimes my inbox doesn't tell me that I've gotten a new one at all.

BUCKS ARE GOOD STUFFS


That is fine! What ever works best! it will probably work better here cause then I won't loose it! I will try and draw that sweet boy Arkady soon!